Newborn Poems by Student Poets at Peak to Peak Charter School
Sunday, September 30, 2007
Silence (press)
No one listens to me it's quiet I'm screaming " Somebody hear me! " silence somebody needs to hear me crying somebody needs to listen insted of shutting me out silence another day gone silence
Bless means the poem is finished and the poet would like positive feedback from readers about what they liked in the poem. This is an invitation to celebrate the finished piece.
Press means the poem is almost finished, and the poet would like readers to “iron out any wrinkles” that they may perceive in the poem. This is an invitation to comment on any aspect of the poem.
Address means the poet has a specific question about a specific aspect of the poem, and wants reader feedback on that aspect only. This is an invitation to comment on the poet’s specific request.
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