by: Foxy Lady
tragic life
will always contain a jewel
that is your heart
Strong
Loving
Beautiful
without you I live in a lonely street
where the day passes
and gives me no sun
Where I am left in the dark of the night
my life halts
graceful singing of rain yet
storm drains
Remain Empty
Along with my heart
Wednesday, September 19, 2007
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2 comments:
The whole thing is good, but I especially loved the second stanza. The ambiguity makes it stronger. My favorite lines: "graceful singing of rain yet storm drains Remain Empty."
nice! I really like both of them.
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