Wednesday, September 19, 2007

Rain of an empty heart ( Press)

by: Foxy Lady

tragic life
will always contain a jewel
that is your heart
Strong
Loving
Beautiful

without you I live in a lonely street
where the day passes
and gives me no sun
Where I am left in the dark of the night
my life halts
graceful singing of rain yet
storm drains
Remain Empty
Along with my heart

3 comments:

esperanza said...

The whole thing is good, but I especially loved the second stanza. The ambiguity makes it stronger. My favorite lines: "graceful singing of rain yet storm drains Remain Empty."

Foxy Lady said...

Thanks

sunglasses girl said...

nice! I really like both of them.