Friday, September 01, 2006

Freedom Limited (press)

Freedom is a Scheme
People believe
Freedom equals anything
I think not
Freedom Is limited
Wether it is the
Government or parents
Limits on everything
Limits on anything
It is not a right
It is not a privalge
It is a scheme
Freedom Limited

2 comments:

esperanza said...

I love how you challenge common opinions in this poem - freedom is not everything, and it will not fix all of our problems. There are a few spellings that you might want to go over, but I really like the nonconformist ideas that you are expressing.

Anonymous said...

Oh my goodness gracious! that was amazing! /like the candy bar M-azing. But better! and without chocolate or a wrapper