Wednesday, August 23, 2006

My poetry from third grade (bless)

I wrote this in third grade and I am now looking beak on my work and diceded to post it.

The Arising Sun
The blinding fire-lighted sun
is arising above the people
of the earth
The sky is watching
night awakening
The owl is aselep

5 comments:

La Maestra said...

Are the typos deliberate?

Grumpy as Always said...

You have had the writing of poems in your life for a while

Anonymous said...

very nice poem. you did a great job

Anonymous said...

You can write really good poetry. Your third grade teacher should be proud!!

Anonymous said...

awwww... is it past the owls bedtime?