Wednesday, August 23, 2006

My poetry from third grade (bless)

I wrote this in third grade and I am now looking beak on my work and diceded to post it.

The Arising Sun
The blinding fire-lighted sun
is arising above the people
of the earth
The sky is watching
night awakening
The owl is aselep


La Maestra said...

Are the typos deliberate?

Grumpy as Always said...

You have had the writing of poems in your life for a while

Anonymous said...

very nice poem. you did a great job

Anonymous said...

You can write really good poetry. Your third grade teacher should be proud!!

Anonymous said...

awwww... is it past the owls bedtime?