Saturday, August 05, 2006

Existence (press)

Existence

Is it a state of being
Or a state of mind
does it even exist?
Can we touch it
Or even hear it
does it even listen?
We can question it
Or even lecture it
does it even care?
Is it mine
Or is it yours
does it even belong?

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

I love the unusual concepts you present in this work. However, I must ask - is the repetative use of 'ever' on purpose? If it is, I apologize, and if it is not, then I'd like to point out its repetitiveness.

Anonymous said...

I like how you have taken a concept and push it into court. Does the "even" in the last line belong?

Anonymous said...

yes

Anonymous said...

That is a really good poem! I liked it, and it flowed well, with the exception of the last two lines.