Saturday, August 05, 2006

Do You Ever? (press)

Do You Ever?

Feel alone
Left out of things
Invisible
Do You Ever?
Feel non-existent
That no one cares
Angry
Do You Ever?
Feel you need that spot
All alone
Hidden in plain veiw
Do You Ever?
Feel unloved
Non-existent
Invisible

5 comments:

x-treme_geek said...

Putting "Do you feel?" after the title as the first line would make it understandable even without the title.

Anonymous said...

I really liked this poem but just know that your not alone!!!!

Anonymous said...

I really like how i can relate to this poem. Right after I get into a fight with somebody. Thanks for sharing!!

Anonymous said...

This was a cool take on this feeling. I think that the repetation of the line Do You Think really pulls the whole poem together. Nice!

Anonymous said...

Wow! I love the sorrow that you put into it I can really relate to it! Awesome!