Newborn Poems by Student Poets at Peak to Peak Charter School
The tree is okay, but I'm notThis is my favorite line. I like how you don't reveal the whole context until the very end, and only then does the title make sense.
I have to agree with la maestra, but I can't help wondering if in the second line you meant "no feeling" instead of "no felling."And until only has one L. Sorry about the grammar-freakness. It's a rather splendid poem, overall though! Keep writing. ~Pinkroses~
Yes you are right i ment to put feeling
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