Tuesday, May 23, 2006

That spot (press)

That spot
people know about
but don't
ever see
That spot
with dignity
it looks so lonely
but is comforting
That spot
need till eternity
That spot
free of guilt
free of the world
That spot
that all can see
That spot
that doesn't quite exist
That spot
oh how I wish
it could be mine alone
but yet that spot
is a sanctuary
For all who believe
That spot

1 comment:

pinkroses said...

Ooh wow. I like it lots.

I <3 the repition of "that spot."

Over and over and over.. really adds emphasis and almost this rhythm to the poem, which makes it fun to read.

~pinkroses~