Sunday, March 05, 2006

Removing Mascara (Press)

Black tears
slide down my cheeks
as my false identity
drips into the sink.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

Oh my god your poem is deep! I think it is perfectly fine the way it is! Keep up the good work!

Anna said...

I think it's great the way it is..well done

Anonymous said...

I LOVE your poem! Its so original. This is so short, yet so emotional and touching!

Bud Hunt said...

Sometimes, a few words do a great job of conveying LOTS of meaning. This is one of those times. You should be very proud -- this is a great poem.

pinkroses said...

I have always admired the way that you can make a powerful impact with your words, no matter how many or how few you have. Keep up the amazing work on your poems and I hope you post more soon!

BlackRose said...

Good Poem......it is great and i know how u feel.....really good work!!