Newborn Poems by Student Poets at Peak to Peak Charter School
Oh my god your poem is deep! I think it is perfectly fine the way it is! Keep up the good work!
I think it's great the way it is..well done
I LOVE your poem! Its so original. This is so short, yet so emotional and touching!
Sometimes, a few words do a great job of conveying LOTS of meaning. This is one of those times. You should be very proud -- this is a great poem.
I have always admired the way that you can make a powerful impact with your words, no matter how many or how few you have. Keep up the amazing work on your poems and I hope you post more soon!
Good Poem......it is great and i know how u feel.....really good work!!
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