Wednesday, February 15, 2006

To Have (press)

To Have

To have
Would be nice
To cuddle
To comfort
How splendid to have
To hold
To be there
I would love
To have
To hug
To keep
To meet
To love
How splendid to have
I wish
But will it happen
If ever
Would be nice
To have


BetaWar said...

Well I think it is a very interesting poem. One thing that may help to improve it though is to put some words on the same lines, such as "To cuddle, to comfort" This could help add a bit of speed to the reading process and excite the reader even if only for a short time.

Anonymous said...

This poem makes me feel a little bit confused but all around i love it! I agree with the comment from betwar too.