Newborn Poems by Student Poets at Peak to Peak Charter School
You are exploring some provocative ideas and images, delving deeper than in some of your earlier work, no? I like the direction you are going and the more sophisticated content. Is the "seepa" in the first line a typo? Do you mean "seeps"?
I love this poem so much. it's so cool!! When i read it I was like "exactly!!!!!" so yeah. It's really good I think this is my favorite poem you've written
Amazing work it goes very well with another of the poems found here. The description is remarkable and very fun to read. While I myself enjoy adding hidden messages to my poems if you know how to look, it is very interesting. Might I ask if there is some significance to the "REVEALED" being all caps or is it just they way it is?
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