Address: does it all flow together? Is this too much puncuation for this poem?
Boys just tell me that they're mine
And that they'll never play me twice.
I give them a chance
But they just feel like you want to dance.
He's really cute and hot.
But his shoes are so not.
I'll give them two chances more.
But they will have to respect me for ever more.
I do like him, I just hope he likes me too.
But alot of people ask "Why don't you do too?''
I say I really really like him and I want to be with him for ever and ever.
People talk and stare but I don't really care.
I just want my life to be very nice!
posted by La Reyna