Newborn Poems by Student Poets at Peak to Peak Charter School
Nice. I am totally addicted to this blog already! That's a cool poem. I've always liked it, and I totally agree. The one thing I would change is the very last line - it just sounds a little cliche. Pretty sweet otherwise!
I do agree with esperanza. I think the last line sounds a little cliche, but the lest of the poem flows well and the meaning is really clear. :D
And I know which friends boyfriend you wrote it for!! lol. I think this poem just reeks of hostility towards the boys trying to take away your friends! Lol. I really like it. It's a great warning.
It's NOT take away my friends - it's hurt them or change who they r for the worst, not the better
Woah. That's very nice. I love the way you wrote it! It seems like it is something that means a lot to you. WELL DONE!
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