Friday, October 14, 2005

I Remember (press)

Written at the same time as "I Remember" by pinkroses

I remember
when life was gay
and gay was happy
I remember
when boys were gross
and so was everything
I remember
when school was fun
and fun was everywhere
I remember
when my heart was whole,
my head was clear,
my soul was optimistic,
and whole, clear, and optimistic were


pinkroses said...

I really like how you wrote this with the repitition of the words. It's short and sweet, which is a good thing! I love it! You rock!

Anonymous said...

I like the conciseness of this poem. hooray!

Anonymous said...

WOW that was awesome i think ur totally done and i wouldnt change a thing thts realy deep!!!!