Friday, October 14, 2005

Hate (bless)

Hate
a strong emotion everyone feels
Hate
words that could break a relationship
Hate
a saying that brings emotions
Hate
the word is drenched with fresh tears
Hate
a word that effects everyone
Hate
people say it
Hate
a word that is followed by harsh words
Hate
is like a drug that hurts anybody who uses it
Hate, Hate , Hate

2 comments:

Hilachita said...

My favorite lines:

Hate
is like a drug that hurts everybody
Hate, Hate, Hate

Hilachita said...

I also like the word choice - like a word being drenched in tears - but I would take out the repition of "everyone" and "everybody"